Hey... this is actually the author of the first story you reviewed, Naruto no Hohoemi. I'm amused by the review in all it's sarcastic glory. Now if I had read this when I was in the beginning stages of the fic, I would have gotten quite upset and ranted about how rude your review was. I have, however, matured a lot since then, and I have to agree with your analysis of the story. I was young when I started and still getting the hang of what I wanted to write. Obviously, if I was writing that story today, it wouldn't start off even a quarter as bad as it had. Unfortunately, as it is 64 chapters lot to date, it's just a little hard to go back and start over. I will... some day. But not today. I admit, I read this review a year or so ago, but I felt the need to come back and leave my two cents. If I to decide to fix the first 64, I'll keep this review in mind.
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on 2008-Oct-09, Thursday 01:53 (UTC)Unfortunately, as it is 64 chapters lot to date, it's just a little hard to go back and start over. I will... some day. But not today.
I admit, I read this review a year or so ago, but I felt the need to come back and leave my two cents.
If I to decide to fix the first 64, I'll keep this review in mind.
Nazo